Score: 6

"Didn't make much sense"

submission: Panda Fight

date: November 23, 2008

First off, the concept's good.

It was to short, the imagies flew by to quickly, you don't know wich ones got the upper hand or who won, if anyone did.
the animation was great though, very smotth and it was gentle on the eyes.

It didn't really give any hint at all about the civil war.
I doupt anyone would know if you didn't write it in the author comments.

The art was nothing, but that's understandable.
It's hard to get good animation and art at the same time, and in this movie as said before, the animation is excellent really smooth.

You should improve the way you tell the story and what it's all about,
And again, to short.

Score: 9

"If it only were so easy!"

submission: Change

date: November 10, 2008

Great message, nice how all pictures/scenes melts together, and pretty good, but i found the music a bit dull, and that's prob it that keeps this from getting a full 10.

If it only were so easy to change!

Score: 8

"horribly awesome"

submission: 29 Cents In Life

date: November 10, 2008

Horrible animation and art, only thing i liked was te picture itself of the homeless guy.
But it was your first, well i can't say how Horrible my absolute first one was, good i haven't submited it here, it would be blammed.

anyways, the message was good and the song was beautiful (wich one is it by the way?), so it gives a solid + for you, and considering it was your first you get relativly high score from me. Great concept and you should perhaps make a remake of this one? With your present skill, as i noticed it was posted in the year 2000.